How can that be the end, you little tease? There has to be more. I was just getting into this. Good job, though
I really enjoyed this story. good job.
Nice. I liked this story. :)
OMG that was so good but, how come it ended so quickly like maybe she got curious about the murders and looked into them?
This is eerie! Excellent, but eerie! I like it very much.
Who dun it!?!?!?! I need to know!!
Excellent story, but felt a bit incomplete, like there was more to it.
Caroleb, I'm really impressed. I liked it a lot!!!!!! Even though we never did find out who did the deed...I was really amazed.
This is really interesting. I'm really hooked...keep going!!
It's great! Magic and ghosts, my favourite theme. Maybe you can get Roarke to wake up and join the ghost party? lol
This story flows so well, and you just got started! I'm impressed, just keep on sending more chapters.
I like Jacie. Very Mavis-like. You're doing a fine job so far, Carole! Keep it up!