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InDeath.net Fan Fiction :: When Two Books a Year Just Isn\'t Enough
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Reviews For Ambushed in Death
Reviewer: tagreen54 Signed Date: 04/14/09 - 02:00PM Title: None

I am new, but really loved this.  I have been wanting to see how Roarke and Eve would react when he was injured.  I liked the turn of events at the end with Eve taking Roake to the Health center.    Would have liked to see what happend to those loose ends.   Since it has been a few years..... i guess not... or I'll check to see if you wrote another story.   Nice job!

Author's Response:

Wow, I\'d almost forgotten about this one.  It has some flaws, I know, and I need to go back and rewrite part of it.  I had only read a couple of the books when I wrote this one.  I did start on a sequel, but it just never fell into place for me.  I\'ve not had internet access for a couple of years, but now that I\'ll be able to get online again, I\'ll see if I can dig up that sequel and get it posted.

Thanks for your comments!!

Reviewer: Treepio Signed Date: 10/21/08 - 05:52AM Title: None

I really enjoyed this story you captured the characters well and the plot was strong.

Reviewer: Kellygirl Signed Date: 09/18/06 - 03:01PM Title: None

Loved it. It was great. Characters are very JD style.

Reviewer: roxie Signed Date: 08/19/06 - 08:52PM Title: None

This was a great story.  It seems like it is unfinished though.  Would love it if you added to it.

Author's Response: Thanks.   You know, I never really thought anyone would really take notice of this story, and I\'m glad some of you have.  Guess I still have some loose ends to clear up, though.  I\'ll have to see what I can do about that.

Reviewer: deedee Signed Date: 08/10/06 - 02:08PM Title: None

it was a great story i liked it

Author's Response:

<G>  thanks, I\'m glad you enjoyed it.  I certainly enjoyed writing it.

 

Reviewer: Kittimak220 Signed Date: 02/19/06 - 09:37PM Title: None

that was good. one question. what's calhoun's business with Roarke?

Author's Response: Hmmm.  I guess I will have to work on explaining that.  Thanks for your support!  I\'ll try to work on something to explain Calhoun\'s attitude for you.

Reviewer: LeahJoan Signed Date: 01/14/06 - 12:22PM Title: None

Really good read...is there more to this story? Or will we see Calhoun again?

Author's Response: I don\'t really know.  When I posted the story, I wasn\'t sure if anyone would read it, or if they\'d care about it.  It\'s a little different from most of the stories posted here.   I hadn\'t thought about continuing it.  Even though I haven\'t had many reviews, I\'ve had a couple of people asking for more detail about Calhoun.  Maybe I\'ll try to work on an epilog, or maybe a sequel.  Thanks for letting me know you read it, and I\'m glad you enjoyed it. 

Reviewer: Rabb Signed Date: 07/11/05 - 02:14AM Title: None

I really enjoyed this!!! Was a little unsure in the first chapter though. I did not like it when Roarke was hurt and did not want Eve to know!! I would love to see what happens to Calhoun!!! Good story!!

Author's Response: I didn't think Roarke would want to worry her. Maybe that's out of character for him? Glad you enjoyed it. Maybe I'll add a little more, or do a followup to deal with Calhoun. Thanks!!!!

Reviewer: nancyk Signed Date: 07/09/05 - 03:14PM Title: None

great story, loved every word of it, can't wait to read more of your work, keep it up thanks

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it. I was afraid no-one would.

Reviewer: Con Signed Date: 07/09/05 - 03:07PM Title: None

I really like this one! Very well done, but I still have trouble with Calhoun's motivation -- we need to know why he hates Roarke so or if he is also guilty.

Author's Response: Hmm. Okay, I'll work on that. Thanks for pointing it out.

Reviewer: Joe Signed Date: 07/08/05 - 10:06PM Title: None

Very good! Loved it :D...

Author's Response: THanks. Hope I got all the loose ends tied up now.

Reviewer: MarieS Signed Date: 07/08/05 - 09:37PM Title: None

Really enjoyed this story. Rather different story line which gave room for some thought. Thanks!

Author's Response: THanks. Glad you liked it.