I am new, but really loved this. I have been wanting to see how Roarke and Eve would react when he was injured. I liked the turn of events at the end with Eve taking Roake to the Health center. Would have liked to see what happend to those loose ends. Since it has been a few years..... i guess not... or I'll check to see if you wrote another story. Nice job!
Wow, I\'d almost forgotten about this one. It has some flaws, I know, and I need to go back and rewrite part of it. I had only read a couple of the books when I wrote this one. I did start on a sequel, but it just never fell into place for me. I\'ve not had internet access for a couple of years, but now that I\'ll be able to get online again, I\'ll see if I can dig up that sequel and get it posted.
Thanks for your comments!!
I really enjoyed this story you captured the characters well and the plot was strong.
Loved it. It was great. Characters are very JD style.
This was a great story. It seems like it is unfinished though. Would love it if you added to it.
Author's Response: Thanks. You know, I never really thought anyone would really take notice of this story, and I\'m glad some of you have. Guess I still have some loose ends to clear up, though. I\'ll have to see what I can do about that.
it was a great story i liked it
<G> thanks, I\'m glad you enjoyed it. I certainly enjoyed writing it.
that was good. one question. what's calhoun's business with Roarke?
Author's Response: Hmmm. I guess I will have to work on explaining that. Thanks for your support! I\'ll try to work on something to explain Calhoun\'s attitude for you.
Really good read...is there more to this story? Or will we see Calhoun again?
Author's Response: I don\'t really know. When I posted the story, I wasn\'t sure if anyone would read it, or if they\'d care about it. It\'s a little different from most of the stories posted here. I hadn\'t thought about continuing it. Even though I haven\'t had many reviews, I\'ve had a couple of people asking for more detail about Calhoun. Maybe I\'ll try to work on an epilog, or maybe a sequel. Thanks for letting me know you read it, and I\'m glad you enjoyed it.
I really enjoyed this!!! Was a little unsure in the first chapter though. I did not like it when Roarke was hurt and did not want Eve to know!!
I would love to see what happens to Calhoun!!!
Author's Response: I didn't think Roarke would want to worry her. Maybe that's out of character for him? Glad you enjoyed it. Maybe I'll add a little more, or do a followup to deal with Calhoun. Thanks!!!!
great story, loved every word of it, can't wait to read more of your work, keep it up
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it. I was afraid no-one would.
I really like this one! Very well done, but I still have trouble with Calhoun's motivation -- we need to know why he hates Roarke so or if he is also guilty.
Author's Response: Hmm. Okay, I'll work on that. Thanks for pointing it out.
Very good! Loved it :D...
Author's Response: THanks. Hope I got all the loose ends tied up now.
Really enjoyed this story. Rather different story line which gave room for some thought. Thanks!
Author's Response: THanks. Glad you liked it.