I really loved this story. I also think you're a very good writer considering these things are just from the fans. Great Job.
Except for the grammatical errors, I enjoyed it.
that was great. it was tightly written and on the mark-but im biased cause im a fan of your stories. keep em comin
I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Great job.
Very nice. It definitely carried on with the Eve and Roarke personalities. The ending was well thought. It hinted, but didn't push into that whole 'Eve with a kid thing'. Keep up the good work.
Great, keep it up. Will we see more of E&R's children?
Having only recently discovered the In Death series, and this website, I just wanted to thank you for adding fuel to my addiction. This is wonderful. Please write more soon.
I really enjoyed this story. I really loved the dream at the end. :) Can't wait for the sequel. ;)
Really like this one, the dream too!
This is great. Please update soon.
This is still terrific! Can't wait for more!
Webster... Where are you? We really need to know what will happen next, and it's been three months since you added to this fantastic story. Any members who knows webster personally, please let her know her fans are waiting.