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Final Chapter

Posted by jlk , 15 September 2012 · 835 views

Friday at ten forty five Peabody tagged Dallas.  “Ready for your math class, LT?”  She was so looking forward to this.  Roarke should be here any time.  McNab was already planted in the eatery.  Homemade boomers couldn’t move him.

“Almost there.  I’ll detour to look at the scene again on the self-termination, then be back to Central by two,” Dallas responded.

Peabody’s smile slipped away.  Dallas’ link showed movement behind her.  She was in her vehicle.  “Where are you?”

“Heading to my appointment.   We changed it to this Greek place.  I’ll bring you something back” Dallas promised, guessing her partner’s response to missing out on a meal.

“What’s the name of the place?  I’ll swing by.” Peabody was up and moving toward the elevators.

“Georgiou’s on Bland.”

Roarke watched his wife being given coffee and sweets by another man.  His rage was controlled, and he knew he had it directed at the right target this time.  This was not her doing, she was not at fault.  Eve simply would never betray him.  She loved him.  What a miracle.  He shut down the live feed to his link and got out of the limo, strolled to the door.  Davidson, head of his personal security, strolled beside him.

He watched her spot him in one of her surrounding spot checks, before he came through the doors.  Surprise and pleasure brought a smile to her mouth.  She brushed the other man’s hand from her arm and stood.  He enjoyed the way she glided to him, the long stride that ate up the distance.  “What are you doing here?”  She took his hand.  “Davidson”  she nodded.

“What a surprise, darling.  We were just stopping in for a quick bite.  Davidson’s wife had mentioned it.”  Roarke kissed her knuckles.  “And you?”

“Damn continuing education.  Come meet Evan.  You’ll like him” she pulled him along behind her.   “Roarke, I’d like you to meet professor Evan Delaney.  Evan, my husband, Roarke.”  She beamed like a proud parent at a school play.  “He’s been teaching me geometry.  And I’m starting to really like it.”

Neither man moved to shake hands.  Eve, oblivious, sorted through papers on the table, handed one to Roarke.  “See?”

“Mmmhmm. Can you get me a coffee, Eve?  Get Davidson settled while I look this over.”  He subtly aimed her.

“OK.  I’m glad you showed up,” she marveled, wandering off.  He sat so he could see her.

“She’s a lovely woman,” Delaney began.

Roarke pinned him with a look.  “Let me be clear.  Don’t touch my wife again.  Ever.  If you do, I’ll terminate you. “He held his gaze steady; the quiet promise seemed somehow more real in the innocuous setting.  He looked at the paper Eve had given him.  Really, this entire situation was his fault, Roarke thought.  She’d chosen this course for her required learning class because of a previous case.  He had been the one to try and show off his geometric knowledge.  Hoping to impress her, he mused.  So when the class was on her list of potential subjects, she’d gone ahead and tried it.

Eve returned with Davidson in tow, handing him a coffee.  “I-“ her communicator beeped.  She walked away toward the windows, listened, responded, and walked back.  The three men hadn’t moved.  “Got a case.  Evan, I’ll see you on Monday.  Davidson, good to see you again.  Take care of Roarke for me.”  She grinned.  Then she brushed her fingers over Roarke’s shoulder.  “I’ll see you at home.”  She turned, spotted her partner coming through the glass doors. “Peabody, you’re with me.  We got one.  No time to eat.” and she breezed out.

McNab came in, wandered to the table, and grinned.  “What’s the drift?”

“I believe the professor was just telling Roarke about his plan to take a position outside the country” Davidson informed the EDD Detective.  

“Sounds like a healthy plan.  Maybe I’ll get one of those dessert things for Peabody to eat later. “McNab looked around the restaurant.  “You should buy this place, Roarke.  It smells good.”

Roarke thought he just might.



End.




i decided to wait until i read the whole story. Thanks for posting the whole story and i thought the story line was fun and i enjoyed reading it. You did a great job with keeping with the characters and i hope to see more story's written by you in the future.
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teampeabody
Sep 15 2012 11:58 PM
Great story awesome y!ou posted the whole thing
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this was great a whole story at once. i like that fact the eve is oblivious and i want to know what happened with the computer it is great that eve seduced it i wonder if she will ever know. i think the fact they have all those droids around have to believe they are ai as well so quick leap to the computer having ai now.

hope you have more coming would love to read more of your work
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Thank you for all the comments. I would like to know everyone's thoughts and feelings so I can improve. I definitely can only post completed stories. It kills me waiting on new chapters for my favorite blogs ID. And i'm still not over Faithful in Death never being completed. jlk
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I loved your story, especially because it was complete. You were so true to Eve, when you had her so clueless about her instructor. I hope you have more planned!
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Thank you for all the comments. I would like to know everyone's thoughts and feelings so I can improve. I definitely can only post completed stories. It kills me waiting on new chapters for my favorite blogs ID. And i'm still not over Faithful in Death never being completed. jlk


i completely agree there are some great stories that just arent completed and it is so frustrating when you want to see them and read them
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yes! i wish some of the talented writers on this site would pick up the threads. or write more stories themselves.
Everyone ... write, write, write.
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I totally agree.....I too, was very happy to see a complete story.......it was very well written and very entertaining......I am going to go back and reread it to see what I missed the first time around..........I totally agree (again) that there are some great stories that need to be completed..............Way to go jlk......................and thank you........................
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reread was just as entertaining as the first..............Bravo to you.............
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Well done! Clever and fun and sweet! Love Eve's obliviousness (is that a word?) and good tie in with Innocent In Death.
Glad you posted it all together...but I don't mind chapter postings either. I guess that I'm just so glad that there are so many writers out there doing this...that I'll take it any way I can...and any way they can produce. I do hate the unfinished...but I know how crazy my life can get and I just figure that either some writers are too busy or just can't decide on the direction of the story.
Thanks to everyone!
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This was a great story. It's also so true about Eve she doesn't realize how attractive she is. I loved it hope to see more of your stories.
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